Soma Cruz
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Matsuda, you idiot!
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Post by Soma Cruz on Jul 21, 2006 1:00:28 GMT -5
There we are, my dial has been editted! Take a look, chief!
...unfortunately, though, I'll be out of town until sometime Monday afternoon... so if you guys go ahead and start, someone move for me.
Thanks, yo.
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Post by The Hush is BACK on Jul 21, 2006 1:53:02 GMT -5
There we are, my dial has been editted! Take a look, chief!
...unfortunately, though, I'll be out of town until sometime Monday afternoon... so if you guys go ahead and start, someone move for me.
Thanks, yo. Nice, but you didn't fill out the 'Powers' section mentioned in the Registration Form.....
It'd be nice to know why the powers on his dial are there....
Now it's all Conchizzie.
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Soma Cruz
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Matsuda, you idiot!
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Post by Soma Cruz on Jul 21, 2006 2:46:08 GMT -5
Damn. I just cant win for losing, huh?
Editted...again.
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Post by ReZourceman on Jul 21, 2006 3:47:39 GMT -5
Cool characters man.
*Slaps Conchizzie*
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No Wow
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The Kills
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Post by No Wow on Jul 21, 2006 7:20:05 GMT -5
(Ive actually decided to join)
Character's Real Name- Avril Houghton Character's hero name- Hazard Age-18
Appearance- (As Hazard) Below Shoulder lenght black hair, Black Jumpsuit, Black Eye mask
Background- At the age of 12 Avril Houghton was an ballet prodigy, competing and dancing internationally, she was set to become the best ballerina ever. But once she reached 13 her life turned upside down.
The day after her thriteenth birthday, whilst she was dancing, her lifting partner suddenly dislocated his foot and both him and Avril were flung to the ground. She was unhurt but he was left paralysed. Two days later there was a flu epidemic in her dancing school and she was amongst the few that remained healthy; a week after this part of the school burned down, killing several students. Avril began to think that she was responsible and started to become depressed. A day later she recieved a telephone call saying that her parents and yonger sister had dissapeared. After six months of searching, they were presumed dead. Through out this time Avril delved into depression and started self- harming. She had to leave the school and return to England to live with foster parents. However (through no fault of her own), the aeroplane she got on was destined for New York.
Upon reaching the New York aeroport, she was greeted by a strange man. He began talking to her and strangely knew everything about her life. He knew all about her "curse". Realising she had no other friend in her life, she agreed to go with this stranger on a "journey".
The stranger taught her the art-of Hapkido, a martial art which centred on self-defense. With her allready established willpower, earned through learning ballet, she mastered Hapkido in 3 months.
After a couple of months under the wing of this strange man, he disappeared. Again Avril was alone in the world. She adopted the codename Hazard and dedided to use her new skills and "curse" to battle evil....
Powers: Is an undiscovered Mutant. Anyone around her immediately has bad luck. She is an expert ballerina and gymnast and is a master of self-defense.
Dial:
Hazard Points 30 Range 0 Team none Speed boot
Click 1 9 10 17 1 Powers: Leap/climb, Combat Reflexes, Probability Control
Click 2 8 10 17 1 Power: Leap/climb, Willpower, Exploit Weakness
Click 3 8 10 17 1 Powers: Stealth, Willpower, Exploit Weakness
Click 4 7 10 16 1 Powers: Stealth, Combat Reflexes, Exploit Weakness
Click 5 7 9 16 1 Powers: Stealth, Combat Reflexes
Click 6 6 9 16 1 Powers: Stealth, Combat Reflexes, Probability Control
09 08 08 07 06 06 10 10 10 10 09 09 17 17 17 16 16 16 01 01 01 01 01 01
(I couldn't find more appropriate colours for combat reflexes and Probability Control) - (HUSH: I Modified it. Everyone, please use Cyan and YellowGreen for those ones, do it manually)
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Post by Parallax on Jul 21, 2006 8:08:01 GMT -5
Zam! Good story, chair. You're one of those people that say "Superman hears the cries of everyone he doesn't save" people, aren't you?
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No Wow
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Post by No Wow on Jul 21, 2006 8:20:04 GMT -5
No. not really....(?)
Glad you like it.
Shes basically a mix between Black Cat, Elektra and Black Widow
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Post by ReZourceman on Jul 21, 2006 8:26:30 GMT -5
What do you mean by that Parallax?
And yeah cool story Chair.
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Post by Parallax on Jul 21, 2006 8:53:45 GMT -5
I believe it was Alan Moore, wrote a story about Superman, in which the statement was made that at all times, Superman could here the people that he was NOT saving cry out.
I mean to say chair has a bit of a dark personality.
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Post by ReZourceman on Jul 21, 2006 9:07:41 GMT -5
OH right.
Fair point.
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No Wow
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Post by No Wow on Jul 21, 2006 9:09:44 GMT -5
I still don't get you
(I hate Superman)
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Post by The Hush is BACK on Jul 21, 2006 14:56:54 GMT -5
Yes, good design chair. However, she does not gain her superhero name yet, but good for thinking ahead.
I have to say, when you try to act normal, you're not as retarded as pashy. Good on you.
And good for using a girl! Everyone always picks guys! I would've used a girl to mix it up, but I use one already in my RPG in the Realms, so I thought trying a male would be nice. However 2 issues:
1) You don't get a super name yet 2) You went over by 1 point. But it doesn't matter.... because:
I'm changing Combat Reflexes to 1.5 points for first click, 1 point/click otherwise. I thought this would be a nice balance.
Chair is now 30 pts.....
Anyone wanna update change their character based on this?[/b]
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Post by Conchizzie on Jul 21, 2006 15:35:02 GMT -5
name:Marisa Lane Bianan(actual name hidden away from her) Age: 19 Appearance: Sexy young asian girl, long black hair, perfect hourglass form, when out of "costume", she wears a buissness outfit. History: "Marisa" was given her name by the terrorist clan called the Ill Ramas(hmmmm) that adopted her when she was young. They taught her how to be the ultimate assasian, how to slay demons from this world. But when she turned 15, she was found to be a "demon", a mutant in actuallity with the powers to heal not only herself but the ones around her by her touch, she was scourged and then cast out of the clan, naked and no one to turn to. After wandering days in the wilderness, she found civilization. A family found her, took her in, and nursed her back from an ill state. After learning reality from her new foster father, she realized that no demons existed, only mutants. She went to America, after hearing a rumor that her real parents were there, in the United states. She wanted to know why they let her go, if they were mutants, and etcetera. She doubles as a real estate agent.
Marisa bianan Range 0 Team Btaman ally9she is a ninja...) Speed Run
Click One Speed 8 Attack 10 Defense 17 Damage 2 Powers: Leap/Climb, BCF, Willpower, exploit Weakness
Click 2 Speed 7 Attack 10 Defense 16 Damage 2 Powers: Leap/Climb, BCF, Willpower, Support
Click 3 Speed 7 Attack 10 Defense 15 Damage 1 Powers: Regen, Support
Click 4 Speed 6 Attack 9 Defense 15 Damage 1 Powers: Regen
08 07 07 06 10 10 10 09 17 16 15 15 02 02 01 01
I'm not completly sold on this dial, if i can have suggestions, that would be great.
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No Wow
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Post by No Wow on Jul 22, 2006 4:27:34 GMT -5
It doesn't seem healing is her main power from the dial.
If she had support on the first click that would be better.
I like the story though and the doubling as an estate agent bit made me laugh.
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Post by Paj Meen Ah on Jul 22, 2006 7:16:26 GMT -5
lol! Same. Still, its what you'd do if you were a ninja by night.
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Post by The Hush is BACK on Jul 23, 2006 18:29:27 GMT -5
The dial is fine, Concherto. The idea is to make whatever you want, so good on you.
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